This resource was obtained to provide students with feedback in their creative writing, particularly during the drafting phase. It also acts as an informative assessment tool for the teacher to see what level students are at with their writing and how they are tracking with the assignment. Furthermore, the reflection section at the bottom of the form enables students to be intentional with the feedback and focus on the areas they should improve on. 

By using such a resource and returning it to students in a timely manner, it not only my demonstrates my ability to assess student learning, but I am able to also demonstrate the purpose of providing appropriate feedback to students about their learning and use it as a formative assessment to direct future teaching.

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Feedback Form

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Created by: Tactful Teaching

Creation date: May, 2018

AITSL Teacher Standards Addressed:

  • 5.1- Assess student learning
  • 5.2 - Provide feedback to students on their learning

Natalie Chai
12 September 2020 at 21:16

This is such a great tool to use as feedback for all writing activities. I am definitely loving this format and if needed, this feedback form can be reused and edited to create other types of feedback form. I liked that this feedback form also included student response as a way for students to reflect on their task and giving them a specific learning goal to work on and achieve. Personally, I would include a 'Teacher's comment' column, just in case, there are specific needs the student need feedback on. Other than that, I really like this feedback form and would personally use it!

Laura Saunders
15 September 2020 at 8:57

[Updated: 15 September 2020 at 8:57]

Hi Anthony,

I really like the way you have two distinct columns of "you did well with" and "you need to work on". This is such a great way to pinpoint the areas that students should be focusing on the improve their abilities in creative writing. I feel like there is a bit of overlap in the next section though "areas you need to work on now are". I think you could probably not have this as you have already covered this above in the "you need to work on" section. Other than that it is great and the opportunity for student feedback is a good idea.

Kaitlin Lilly
16 September 2020 at 8:31

Brilliant form! The "You did well with" will really help in boosting confidence. Being able to just tick boxes will make it very easy for you to fill out also. I wonder if you would go through this page with each student? Actually talk them through it as you are ticking off boxes to allow them to ask any clarifying questions as you go?

Carmen Luong
16 September 2020 at 12:28

Hi Anthony, 

I really like the format of this tool you have used for writing activities. The feedback form can be kept and reused, edited and provides a skeleton framework that can be used in the future. I think this is very effective and efficient. The feedback clearly states the expectations that you had for the assessment, and provides an opportunity for the student to evaluate and reflect on their own performance which is holistic and thorough. 

Like Natalie has already mentioned, a 'teacher's comment' section would give space to write a more personal and individualised feedback for the student. Otherwise, great assessment form overall. 

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