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18 September 2019, 04:55 AM

Hi All,

   Does anyone want some critical feedback on their standard 5, It may make it easier to write the first part of assessment as we are not meant to be perfect yet and will give your assessment another aspect.  Just that it seems nearly everything written is positive.  Reply to this and I will endeavor to find some thing that may require changing or altering.  Don't take it to heart thou.

And if anyone gets a chance pick up on anything that could be fixed on mine.

Hear from you soon,

               Will. 

18 September 2019, 06:16 AM

Comments can also be deleted if you think it is not relevant, you don't want to use in your assignment or if you alter work so comment is no longer relevant.

18 September 2019, 01:34 PM

Yes, can you provide me with some feedback

Thanks in advance :)

18 September 2019, 05:59 PM

Hi Will!

Yes please! Critical feedback will be great!!

Thanks,

Kim

18 September 2019, 06:40 PM

There you go!  It was hard to find some thing for you to improve on- great work.  And really I was just being picky and my comments could be used in "how to improve column".

18 September 2019, 08:11 PM

Hi Will

Yes please that would be amazing. I think I may have put something your page but will double check and add if not :)

thanks

Tania

20 September 2019, 07:14 AM

Done

   on your 4th or 5th page relating to 5.4.   It is good evidence it just needs to be explained better.  I wish I took photos during class more often now

20 September 2019, 07:26 AM

Hi William 

Yes please! would love some feedback. 

Cheers Bree

21 September 2019, 01:36 PM

you need a link on your dashboard.  create one from share in drop down menu then copy paste onto dashboard.  

22 September 2019, 08:25 AM

Thanks!

All fixed i think..